rough post 2

after going inside the back fridge in the store acey and apple go to the back of the fridge were they find 3 people sitting in a corner with large coats they jump up pointing a gun acey says wait one man says who are you we are hiding here acey explains what happened outside the 3 outher people look at each outher and say ok quick come this way acey and apple follow they go in to a passage way linking the store they walk a small way to find a room marked managers office they go inside to find a heavily armored metal door the girl from the group presses a button and says were back with 2 more . ok says a voice and the door opens in they go inside is an old man and old lady everyone greats each outher apple says so what is happening the old man says something happened in the night we were filling the shelves early this morning and the power went out after that everything went crazy we all went outside as soon as we went out side a lady was chasing a man when she go hold of him she bit off his ear then took a chunk out of his throat so we all ran back inside were we have been waiting to see what happens there is an emergency button here in the safe which i pressed a few hours ago they said they are busy but should be here some time today apple says so its just a case of waiting yes says the old man

post 1 rough edit

Apple and acey woke up to a mildly hot summers days in suburban west Australia the air is fresh the wind is blowing outside the close horse is making a small creaking noise acey desires to get up good to the kitchen looking around to see what's to eat nothing much looks in fridge gets tortes cheese and tomato repairs and cooks with a solid looking pan midway eating Apple walks in to the kitchen gets a piece of food eats and sits down on lounge chair acey says no noise everyone must have von out odd for 10am on a Sunday morning looking at the fridge to see if there is a note acey moves to the window to see parental car is von goes to parents bedroom to see if anyone is home no none is at home just Apple and acey acey goes for the phone no power odd try’s his mobile and there is no signals notices an email from mum sent last night email reads we had to get out to take your grandparents to female to a boat leaving for Singapore time email is sent is 11.24pm last night acey shows Apple and says it only takes 30min to female so where are they I wonder where they are let's go to the shop ok both http ready and go to the shop did not see anyone on the way to the shop pull up outside local store only a few cars in car park and no one to be seen they go inside doors are jammed open no one on the register lights are din like power is come ING from generator they go shopping expecting some to come to register later they they get to register none acey rays let's vi I'm not waiting so they go past register and take the payed four food to car they here a stretching of types and a cop car come screaming around the corner iv to Tue car park hits a lamp post spins and flips on to roof they are just about to run over where 4 scooter come screaming in they get of their shooters go in cop car and pull out the cop with a lot of force one of them cuts his throttle and he drops to the ground acey and apple drop to the ground and scooter people look there eat start to walk over shouting come out come out were ever you are acey and apple run back iv to shop scooter follow yelling we are coming to kill you apple hide in back of store acey pulls out milk and they hide in fridge